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PostSubject: Yamanaka, Yorukasa (APPROVED)   Mon 20 May - 22:31

Name: Yamanaka Yorukasa

Age: 12

Sex: Female

Affiliation: Konoha

Clan/Family: Yamanaka

Merits:
Clan Membership (2 points)
Bookworm (2 points)
Primary Elemental Affinity (1 point)
Secondary Elemental Affinity (2 points)
Natural Immunity (2 points)
Special Resistance (Damage-type Poison)(level 2: 6 points)

Flaws:
Small Frame (2 points)
Shy (1 point)
Weak Willed (2 points)
Intolerance: spiders (1 point)
Intolerance: animal cruelty (1 point)
Known Anathema (6 points)

Elemental Affinity: Fuuton (primary), Suiton (secondary)

General Personality Outline: Shy, withdrawn, quiet, insecure, introvert. She’s only sure of herself while fighting.

Character Background:

Yamanaka Yorukasa was born into the Yamanaka family. Unfortunately, her mother, once a skilled ANBU-member, fell in battle. Raised by her father, a rather strange scientist, she experienced a rather warped childhood. Her father was interested in using his own daughter in his experiments. Wanting to create a shinobi immune to a certain type of poison, he fed his little daughter food and drinks that contained small amounts of poison, increasing the dose bit by bit. Years later, Yorukasa has successfully developed an immunity to poison, thanks to her father’s experiments. She doesn’t take milk or tea to school, oh no, she prefers drinking poison, as she’s accustomed to that. Don’t even think about telling her that it’s wrong, because you’d be met with a look of confusion and disbelief. It doesn’t harm her. Who cares that everyone else seems to be allergic to her special drink? Yorukasa does miss a real female role-model, because of the loss of her mother at a young age, and therefore turned to Yamanaka Ino, copying her style here and there. The girl loves helping out in the flower shop, for she simply loves flowers.

Mental Skills and Ranks:
Academics: C
Politics: D
Medicine: D
Chakra Control: C
Nin Jutsu: C
Suiton Jutsu: C
Fuuton Jutsu: C (Specialty: attack-type Fuuton jutsu)
Doton Jutsu: D
Raiton Jutsu: E
Katon Jutsu: E

Physical Skills and Ranks:
Athletics: C
Brawl: D
Buki Jutsu: D
Stealth: C
Survival: D
Shuriken Jutsu: C (Specialty: senbon)
Tracking: D

Social Skills and Ranks:
Animal Ken: D
Empathy: D
Intimidation: D
Expression: D
Persuasion: D
Socialize: D
Subterfuge: D
Shinobi Codes: D
Genjutsu: C (Specialty: area genjutsu)
Impersonation: D

Starting Jutsu:

D:
Doku Housha- Poison Emission (Custom)
Hi Rensa Isshin - Unchained Mind (D)

C:
Shintenshin no Jutsu - Mind Body Switch Technique

Stats:

STAMINA - 3

SPEED - 3

NINJUTSU - 3

TAIJUTSU - 3

GENJUTSU - 4

INTELLIGENCE - 5

SEALING KNOWLEDGE - 3

STRENGTH - 2



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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Yorukasa (APPROVED)   Mon 20 May - 23:10

Looks good at first glance, will have to double check and calculate if you did all the skills costs and stat costs correctly, PM your custom Jutsu to me for a checkup. You should likewise state what elements you posses, I believe you forgot this. You have mentioned both elements but not which one is primary and which one secondary.

Since you're a known and seasoned player of Neo Naruto an example roleplay is not necessary. But usually it is mandatory.

So let me give this a quick check in a minute and then you'll have my approval and I shall go make your profile and we can get you ready for your first event.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Yorukasa (APPROVED)   Mon 20 May - 23:19

Edited.

I'll PM you the custom jutsu in a minute.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Yorukasa (APPROVED)   Tue 21 May - 12:12

I checked your Jutsu in PM, and this is how I rebalanced it for you as you requested. Do you agree to this?

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Doku Housha - Poison Emission
Art: Ninjutsu
Rank: D-Rank
Type: Supplementary Modifier
Range: Self only
Chakra: 4

Description: This technique allows the user to expel a poisonous liquid through any part of their body. This poison can then be applied to a weapon, rubbed on the target, forcibly ingested, or applied to the target to poison them.
Any of the poisons in the users possession can be used for this technique.
The poison emitted by this technique will also harm the user, unless the user somehow has immunity to this poison.
The effects of the technique last for 2 rounds or until the user cancels them on their own.

Limit: Vial Of Poison
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Yorukasa (APPROVED)   Tue 21 May - 22:18

Agreed.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Yorukasa (APPROVED)   Thu 23 May - 1:07

Ok let's do a final checkup then.

Age, Check.

Name...lol....Night Umbrella Ella Elah Eh Eeeeeeh! Razz ....Check

Affiliation....check.

Merits and Flaws....check

General Personality Outline....Interesting...check.

Background...quite original and nice...I like....check.

Mental Skills....check....4 points left

Physical skills....check...But you keep 18 points...are you sure about this? It's not like you get to KEEP them.

Social Skills....very check....all 80 Points used exactly.

Starting Jutsu....very check..all 25 CP used exactly.

Stats...check....64 points used...one left.

All check...but you keep a total of 22 CP unused, are you sure about this. Since if you thought you get to keep those I have bad news for you. Razz ....You don't >___>

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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Yorukasa (APPROVED)   Thu 23 May - 2:28

Edited the mental skills. Found a mistake.
There should be 0 points left in that category.

There should only be a grand total of 1 point left overall.
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PostSubject: Re: Yamanaka, Yorukasa (APPROVED)   Fri 24 May - 10:18

Physical Skills....check. 1 point left

Mental Skills...check. 0 points left

Social skills...check. 0 points left

You're all done young ladeh.

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Name: Yamanaka Yorukasa

Age: 12

Sex: Female

Affiliation: Konoha

Clan/Family: Yamanaka

Merits:
Clan Membership (2 points)
Bookworm (2 points)
Primary Elemental Affinity (1 point)
Secondary Elemental Affinity (2 points)
Natural Immunity (2 points)
Special Resistance (Damage-type Poison)(level 2: 6 points)

Flaws:
Small Frame (2 points)
Shy (1 point)
Weak Willed (2 points)
Intolerance: spiders (1 point)
Intolerance: animal cruelty (1 point)
Known Anathema (6 points)

Elemental Affinity: Fuuton (primary), Suiton (secondary)

General Personality Outline: Shy, withdrawn, quiet, insecure, introvert. She’s only sure of herself while fighting.

Character Background:

Yamanaka Yorukasa was born into the Yamanaka family. Unfortunately, her mother, once a skilled ANBU-member, fell in battle. Raised by her father, a rather strange scientist, she experienced a rather warped childhood. Her father was interested in using his own daughter in his experiments. Wanting to create a shinobi immune to a certain type of poison, he fed his little daughter food and drinks that contained small amounts of poison, increasing the dose bit by bit. Years later, Yorukasa has successfully developed an immunity to poison, thanks to her father’s experiments. She doesn’t take milk or tea to school, oh no, she prefers drinking poison, as she’s accustomed to that. Don’t even think about telling her that it’s wrong, because you’d be met with a look of confusion and disbelief. It doesn’t harm her. Who cares that everyone else seems to be allergic to her special drink? Yorukasa does miss a real female role-model, because of the loss of her mother at a young age, and therefore turned to Yamanaka Ino, copying her style here and there. The girl loves helping out in the flower shop, for she simply loves flowers.

Mental Skills and Ranks:
Academics: C
Politics: D
Medicine: D
Chakra Control: C
Nin Jutsu: C
Suiton Jutsu: C
Fuuton Jutsu: C (Specialty: attack-type Fuuton jutsu)
Doton Jutsu: D
Raiton Jutsu: E
Katon Jutsu: E

Physical Skills and Ranks:
Athletics: C
Brawl: D
Buki Jutsu: D
Stealth: C
Survival: D
Shuriken Jutsu: C (Specialty: senbon)
Tracking: D

Social Skills and Ranks:
Animal Ken: D
Empathy: D
Intimidation: D
Expression: D
Persuasion: D
Socialize: D
Subterfuge: D
Shinobi Codes: D
Genjutsu: C (Specialty: area genjutsu)
Impersonation: D

Starting Jutsu:

D:
Doku Housha- Poison Emission (Custom)
Hi Rensa Isshin - Unchained Mind (D)

C:
Shintenshin no Jutsu - Mind Body Switch Technique

Stats:

STAMINA - 3

SPEED - 3

NINJUTSU - 3

TAIJUTSU - 3

GENJUTSU - 4

INTELLIGENCE - 5

SEALING KNOWLEDGE - 3

STRENGTH - 2


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