Aburame Konchuu (APPROVED!)

Village Konoha
Name: Aburame, konchuu
Sex: male
Age 14

Merits

Clan membership (2points)
Aburame
Primary elemental affinity (1 point) Doton
Hardcore (2 points)
Primary stat boost (2 points) Int
Secondary stat boost (1 point) Spd
Common sense (2 points)
Quick healer (2 points)

Flaws

Shy (1 point)
Intolerance (1 point)
People that underestimate him
Vice (2 points)
Can never refuse a fight
Code of honor (2 points)
Weak willed (2 points)
Phobia (2 points)
Snakes

Stats

Sta 2 (2 points)
Int 4 + 4 (12 points)
Str 4 (12 points)
Spd 5 + 2 (20 points)
SLK 2 (2 points)
Nin 3 (6 points)
Tai 3 (6 points)
Gen 2 (2 points)
Cp left ( 3 points )

Skills

Mental

Academics C (17 points)
Politics D (7 points )
Medicine D (7 points)
Chakra Control C (17 points)
Doton C (17 points)
Investigation D (7 points)
Blacksmith D (7 points)

Physical ( + 30 Hardcore )

Athletics C (17 points)
Brawl C (17 points)
Buki C (17 points)
Stealth C (17 points)
Survival C (17 points)
Tracking C (17 points)
Larceny D (7 points)

Social

Animal ken C (17 points)
Empathy D (7 points)
Persuasion D (7 points)
Subterfuge D (7 points)
Shinobi codes D (7 points)
Impersonation C (17 points)
Intimidation C (17 points)

Specialty
Fighting with kunai
Stealth movement
Tracking smell

Jutsu
Mushi Yose no jutsu -insect gathering D rank (5 points)
Jiseki Mushi no jutsu - Tracer insect D rank (5 points)
Doton kawa no justu - earth hiding D rank (5 points)
Henge no jutsu - Transformation E rank (2 points)
Kawarimi no jutsu - Change of body stance E rank (2 points)
Raiken - thunder fist D rank (5 points)

Example Roleplay and Submitting the Character Application

After growing upon the streets of asterrocky I learned that stealing came easy to me, so I came up with a plan with my best and only friend that I would steal the items and he would be the bounty hunter that could return all the items that I stole.
After we both became rich we worked out the gold and jewelry was worth a lot but not as much as information. We decided that we would leave all the gold and jewelry to the lower thief’s; and we would concentrate on stealing information. This plan worked perfectly and we were the most powerful men in the country and that we could do what we wanted. Today I am in charge of finding new spies and training them to find information that I could use it to help me later. My friend is in charge as selling the information to the highest bidder.

Character background
Being raised by the Abumare household I have always learnt that I should never underestimate my friends and enemies.
Since I was 5 I have been hunted by nightmares about snakes crawling into my clothes and eating all my insects.
Whenever I have these dreams I wake up in a cold sweat and am unable to move for up to 10 mins. I have told my family about the dreams and they said that I so focus my charka before I go to sleep, and that I my never speak of this to anyone outside the household. Now that I focus my charka before I sleep the dreams come less but I still see snakes in my waking hours and feel like I am being bitten whenever I see one. I was instructed form a young age on Shinobi codes and going unseen.

General personality outline
I have a strong code of honor, putting the reputation of the clan above all else, I never give up or underestimate my enemies, always going full out.
I think it is very important that you always keep your word and do your best to make your clan happy. Keeping the clan secret is more important than my life, my honor or even my team. I get angry at people that think they are better than me because they're from a better household or just because they are older. I find it hard to respect people till they have proven them self to me or my clan. That said once you have my respect I will do what you ask as long as it serves my clan or my purpose.

I am missing your character appearance, character background and general personality outline.

Character appearance



Character background
Being raised by the Abumare household i have always learn the i should never underestimate my friends and enemies.
Sense i was 5 i have being hunted by nightmares about snakes crawling into my clothes and eating all my insects.
when ever i have these dreams i wake up in a cold sweat and am unable to move for up to 10 mins. i have told my family about the dreams and said that i so focus my charka before i go to sleep, and that i my never speak of this to anyone outside the household. Now that i focus my charka before i sleep the dreams come less but i still see snakes in my waking hours and feel like i am being bitten whenever i see one. I was instructed for a young age on Shinobi codes and on going unseen.

general personality outline
i have a strong code of honor putting the reputation of the clan above all els, i never give up or underestimate my enemies always going full out.
i think it is very important that you always keep your word and best your best to make your clan happy. keeping the clan secret is more important then me life, my honor and even my team. i get angry at people that think they are better then me because they are form a better household or just because they are older. i find it hard to respect people till they have proven them self to me or my clan. That said once you have my respect i will do what you ask as long as it serves my clan or purpose.

Sorry i didn't see that someone was using the same pic

Character appearance update

Although I absolutly love the fact that you have chosen Aburame (my all time fave) and a lore fitting one at that, I would really like it if you used spelling and grammar check (Word is your friend, or any other program with such options)

OK i will try and pay attention to what i type.
do you what me to retype my last post?

No, but I would like it if you kept all info regarding your character in your first post, have that post spell and gramar checked. Also if you could make the sample roleplay a bit more more play and a bit less of a list that random person did (which kinda looks a bit Mary Sue :S )

i understand what you mean but i thought i could just post something original. I read on the site, and I quote "or you could grace us by writing something original"

i have never played a roll play in a forum before only tabletop RPGS

Fear not we are gracefull and benelevant admins. Also we have our share of beginning players, as a matter of fact I was one at the previous version of this site and quite a few people from that migrated here so everyone knows your feels bro.

The thing about typing a good rp is to have social contact and interaction with other characters, this way we can see how well you can live into the role of being someone else. Another defining thing about rp is that accomplishments have to be worked for and earned this is the struggle of character growth.

Also note that with original Red probably refered to character concepts, don't worry I find the idea of a melee fighting aburame interesting enough if that's what you're going for. just try to make your sample rp a bit more of a movie scene and not a plot of a movie that you could find on the back of a movie case (that is not meant as an insult btw)

Our excuses for taking so long on your application. It's just that we try to make sure to keep the quality of players up high due to bad past experience with such thing.
However with everything checked, I would say you are ready and set to be approved.
I see you also learned how to edit your posts and such, great.

Anyway, sorry for the delay. And welcome to Neo Naruto.

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